Wednesday, February 18, 2015

Thought Experiment


CREATIVE EXPERIMENT, THE END OF THE WORLD

WRITE FIVE SHORT SECTIONS--A POEM, A PROSE POEM, OR STRAIGHT PROSE-- EXPLORING THE END OF THE WORLD SCENARIO USING THE PROGRESSION BELOW:

1.  Some version of ideology, of a familiar version of the End.
2.  Critique, irony that revise and challenge ideology, the standard version.
3.  Focus on trauma and fragmentation, the body shifting forms, identities in flux
4.  Imagining resistance to ruling powers and projecting possible utopias, new worlds
5.  Trying to apprehend the nonhuman, the world without us, an unimaginable end


Here's an example from poet Mary Karr: 


Disappointments of the Apocalypse


Once warring factions agreed upon the date   
and final form the apocalypse would take,   
and whether dogs and cats and certain trees
deserved to sail, and if the dead would come or be left   
a forwarding address, then opposing soldiers   
met on ravaged plains to shake hands   
and postulate the exact shade
of the astral self—some said lavender,   
others gray. And physicists rocketed
copies of the decree to paradise
in case God had anything to say,
the silence that followed being taken   
for consent, and so citizens
readied for celestial ascent.

Those who hated the idea stayed indoors   
till the appointed day. When the moon   
clicked over the sun like a black lens   
over a white eye, they stepped out   
onto porches and balconies to see   
the human shapes twist and rise   
through violet sky and hear trees uproot   
with a sound like enormous zippers   
unfastening. And when the last grassblades   
filled the air, the lonely vigilants fell   
in empty fields to press their bodies   
hard into dirt, hugging their own outlines.

Then the creator peered down from his perch,   
as the wind of departing souls tore the hair   
of those remaining into wild coronas,   
and he mourned for them as a father   
for defiant children, and he knew that each   
small skull held, if not some vision
of his garden, then its aroma of basil
and tangerine washed over by the rotting sea.   
They alone sensed what he’d wanted
as he first stuck his shovel into clay
and flung the planets over his shoulder,
or used his thumbnail to cut smiles and frowns   
on the first blank faces. Even as the saints   
arrived to line before his throne singing
and a wisteria poked its lank blossoms
through the cloudbank at his feet,
he trained his gaze on the deflating globe
where the last spreadeagled Xs clung like insects,   
then vanished in puffs of luminous smoke,

which traveled a long way to sting his nostrils,   
the journey lasting more than ten lifetimes.   
A mauve vine corkscrewed up from the deep   
oblivion, carrying the singed fume
of things beautiful, noble, and wrong.


Here's a quick runthrough--

Talking to the End of the World

Hey end of the world will you please shut up.
Hey end of the world I want you bad because the world we made sucks.
Hey end of the world let me grab you by your starry tail explosive and unimaginable.
Hey end of the world I want so much God here it's killing me or you or everything.

Hey end
of the world
I can't hear anything but clamor and explosion and I can't even think
what you are sometimes, anytime, no time at all. 

Or I get confused and think I am you.

Boots on me are fire.  Floods come off my head, blood rains.
I'm the last fountain in the world, the last mountain gushing radio tears.

Hey end of the world when we make it to camp I'm still running but I don't see you anywhere behind
or even up ahead. 

We make a big fire with the left boot, pour out water from the right.
It's finally the end
of the end

and standing on a planet I see another 
falling around the sun belonging to no one
not even you. 


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